Ghyll talk:Carsokian - Revision history

Morbus Iff: Using the new ResolvedTalk template for whitespaced pages.

2005-05-13T20:18:07Z

Using the new ResolvedTalk template for whitespaced pages.

Jcowan: Removed obsolete discussion (in this case, all of it)

2004-10-14T13:49:13Z

Removed obsolete discussion (in this case, all of it)

Morbus Iff at 12:56, 26 September 2004

2004-09-26T12:56:55Z

Sbp: Changes after the date are fine if they fall in one of these categories.

2004-09-25T14:14:38Z

Changes after the date are fine if they fall in one of these categories.

PhineasCrank: Everything is relative

2004-09-25T14:03:51Z

Everything is relative

Sbp: Geographical note.

2004-09-25T12:11:58Z

Geographical note.

PhineasCrank: Damn, caught!

2004-09-23T12:20:24Z

Damn, caught!

Morbus Iff: Gabson Foye and Bethany Mboya

2004-09-23T03:18:39Z

Gabson Foye and Bethany Mboya

PhineasCrank: More about why tomorrow, eh?

2004-09-23T02:58:04Z

More about why tomorrow, eh?

New page

Right. Have at it then. Hack it apart. There must be plenty of inconsistancies.
I'm not quite happy with this entry, but I felt that someone had to dib it and no one else seemed eager, so I did. Mainly, to keep the game flowing. That'll teach me!

I'll add the dates to the timeline after all the edits are done.
--[[User:PhineasCrank|Doctor Phineas Crank]] 22:58, 22 Sep 2004 (EDT)

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−	Right. Have at it then. Hack it apart. There must be plenty of inconsistancies. I'm not quite happy with this entry, but I felt that someone had to dib it and no one else seemed eager, so I did. Mainly, to keep the game flowing. That'll teach me! I'll add the dates to the timeline after all the edits are done. --[[User:PhineasCrank\|Doctor Phineas Crank]] 22:58, 22 Sep 2004 (EDT)

−	No worries about the timeline - when I go through my copyediting phase, I always update all the other stuff in tune with it. A ''very'' quick readthrough (pizza in the oven, no time to factcheck) makes me pause on the Gabson Foye mention: wasn't his future wife hinted at a relation with Bethany, as opposed to him? Or is it just his mother who heard wrong? My memory just may be wrong. --[[User:Morbus Iff\|Morbus Iff]] 23:18, 22 Sep 2004 (EDT)
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−	Well, I've a fair few dates, so I think it's only fair that I do some of that work. And, I'm happy to help out. Now, as to the Bethany/Foye reference.... After re-reading, I think you are correct! It was Siam Sinch that Foye was to wed. I'll make corrections at lunch.
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−	One small not-quite-inconsistency that you may nontheless like to deal with: "they have representatives as far as the Evesque Valley and the Sarfelogian Mountains" and "[t]hey also have notable enclaves in the Vale of Serdoch, Alezan and the Baleman neighborhood" is repetitious since the Baleman is in the Evesque Valley (on its northern edge). --[[User:Sbp\|Sean B. Palmer]] 08:11, 25 Sep 2004 (EDT)
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−	~~Well, I didn't think I was allowed to edit entries after the deadline, but... --[[User:PhineasCrank\|Doctor Phineas Crank]] 10:03, 25 Sep 2004 (EDT)~~
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−	Yep, it's fine to edit entries after the turn deadline as long as they're either typographical corrections, inconsistency repairs, or other changes which don't affect the semantics of the article and yet are obvious improvements. We've been doing so quite often all across the wiki, especially for typographical changes. Thanks for the correction! --[[User:Sbp\|Sean B. Palmer]] 10:14, 25 Sep 2004 (EDT)

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	Well, I didn't think I was allowed to edit entries after the deadline, but... --[[User:PhineasCrank\|Doctor Phineas Crank]] 10:03, 25 Sep 2004 (EDT)		Well, I didn't think I was allowed to edit entries after the deadline, but... --[[User:PhineasCrank\|Doctor Phineas Crank]] 10:03, 25 Sep 2004 (EDT)

−	Yep, it's fine to edit entries after the turn deadline as long as they're either typographical corrections, inconsistency repairs, or other changes which don't affect the semantics of the article and yet are obvious improvements. We've been doing so quite often all across the wiki, especially for typographical changes.	+	Yep, it's fine to edit entries after the turn deadline as long as they're either typographical corrections, inconsistency repairs, or other changes which don't affect the semantics of the article and yet are obvious improvements. We've been doing so quite often all across the wiki, especially for typographical changes. Thanks for the correction! --[[User:Sbp\|Sean B. Palmer]] 10:14, 25 Sep 2004 (EDT)
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	Well, I didn't think I was allowed to edit entries after the deadline, but... --[[User:PhineasCrank\|Doctor Phineas Crank]] 10:03, 25 Sep 2004 (EDT)		Well, I didn't think I was allowed to edit entries after the deadline, but... --[[User:PhineasCrank\|Doctor Phineas Crank]] 10:03, 25 Sep 2004 (EDT)
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		+	Yep, it's fine to edit entries after the turn deadline as long as they're either typographical corrections, inconsistency repairs, or other changes which don't affect the semantics of the article and yet are obvious improvements. We've been doing so quite often all across the wiki, especially for typographical changes.
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	One small not-quite-inconsistency that you may nontheless like to deal with: "they have representatives as far as the Evesque Valley and the Sarfelogian Mountains" and "[t]hey also have notable enclaves in the Vale of Serdoch, Alezan and the Baleman neighborhood" is repetitious since the Baleman is in the Evesque Valley (on its northern edge). --[[User:Sbp\|Sean B. Palmer]] 08:11, 25 Sep 2004 (EDT)		One small not-quite-inconsistency that you may nontheless like to deal with: "they have representatives as far as the Evesque Valley and the Sarfelogian Mountains" and "[t]hey also have notable enclaves in the Vale of Serdoch, Alezan and the Baleman neighborhood" is repetitious since the Baleman is in the Evesque Valley (on its northern edge). --[[User:Sbp\|Sean B. Palmer]] 08:11, 25 Sep 2004 (EDT)
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		+	Well, I didn't think I was allowed to edit entries after the deadline, but... --[[User:PhineasCrank\|Doctor Phineas Crank]] 10:03, 25 Sep 2004 (EDT)

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	Well, I've a fair few dates, so I think it's only fair that I do some of that work. And, I'm happy to help out. Now, as to the Bethany/Foye reference.... After re-reading, I think you are correct! It was Siam Sinch that Foye was to wed. I'll make corrections at lunch.		Well, I've a fair few dates, so I think it's only fair that I do some of that work. And, I'm happy to help out. Now, as to the Bethany/Foye reference.... After re-reading, I think you are correct! It was Siam Sinch that Foye was to wed. I'll make corrections at lunch.
	--[[User:PhineasCrank\|Doctor Phineas Crank]] 08:20, 23 Sep 2004 (EDT)		--[[User:PhineasCrank\|Doctor Phineas Crank]] 08:20, 23 Sep 2004 (EDT)
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		+	One small not-quite-inconsistency that you may nontheless like to deal with: "they have representatives as far as the Evesque Valley and the Sarfelogian Mountains" and "[t]hey also have notable enclaves in the Vale of Serdoch, Alezan and the Baleman neighborhood" is repetitious since the Baleman is in the Evesque Valley (on its northern edge). --[[User:Sbp\|Sean B. Palmer]] 08:11, 25 Sep 2004 (EDT)

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	No worries about the timeline - when I go through my copyediting phase, I always update all the other stuff in tune with it. A ''very'' quick readthrough (pizza in the oven, no time to factcheck) makes me pause on the Gabson Foye mention: wasn't his future wife hinted at a relation with Bethany, as opposed to him? Or is it just his mother who heard wrong? My memory just may be wrong. --[[User:Morbus Iff\|Morbus Iff]] 23:18, 22 Sep 2004 (EDT)		No worries about the timeline - when I go through my copyediting phase, I always update all the other stuff in tune with it. A ''very'' quick readthrough (pizza in the oven, no time to factcheck) makes me pause on the Gabson Foye mention: wasn't his future wife hinted at a relation with Bethany, as opposed to him? Or is it just his mother who heard wrong? My memory just may be wrong. --[[User:Morbus Iff\|Morbus Iff]] 23:18, 22 Sep 2004 (EDT)
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		+	Well, I've a fair few dates, so I think it's only fair that I do some of that work. And, I'm happy to help out. Now, as to the Bethany/Foye reference.... After re-reading, I think you are correct! It was Siam Sinch that Foye was to wed. I'll make corrections at lunch.
		+	--[[User:PhineasCrank\|Doctor Phineas Crank]] 08:20, 23 Sep 2004 (EDT)

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−	Right. Have at it then. Hack it apart. There must be plenty of inconsistancies.	+	Right. Have at it then. Hack it apart. There must be plenty of inconsistancies. I'm not quite happy with this entry, but I felt that someone had to dib it and no one else seemed eager, so I did. Mainly, to keep the game flowing. That'll teach me! I'll add the dates to the timeline after all the edits are done. --[[User:PhineasCrank\|Doctor Phineas Crank]] 22:58, 22 Sep 2004 (EDT)
−	I'm not quite happy with this entry, but I felt that someone had to dib it and no one else seemed eager, so I did. Mainly, to keep the game flowing. That'll teach me!

−	I'~~ll add~~ the ~~dates~~ to the ~~timeline after all the edits are done~~.	+	No worries about the timeline - when I go through my copyediting phase, I always update all the other stuff in tune with it. A ''very'' quick readthrough (pizza in the oven, no time to factcheck) makes me pause on the Gabson Foye mention: wasn't his future wife hinted at a relation with Bethany, as opposed to him? Or is it just his mother who heard wrong? My memory just may be wrong. --[[User:Morbus Iff\|Morbus Iff]] 23:18, 22 Sep 2004 (EDT)
−	--[[User:~~PhineasCrank~~\|~~Doctor Phineas Crank~~]] 22:58, 22 Sep 2004 (EDT)