Ghyll:Edvard von Craghelm - Revision history

Jcowan: Fixing my name

2005-06-12T03:24:35Z

Fixing my name

2005-01-29T04:03:23Z

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2004-10-06T22:10:40Z

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2004-10-06T15:56:36Z

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2004-10-03T04:48:38Z

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2004-10-02T15:43:55Z

2004-10-02T15:39:43Z

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2004-10-02T05:14:49Z

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2004-10-02T05:09:51Z

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2004-10-02T04:26:44Z

Making notes

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 '''Citations''':  [[Anaximancer]], [[Plain of Brahang]], [[Umbo Moor]].
---[[User:Jcowan|Jcowan]] 01:09, 2 Oct 2004 (EDT)
+--[[User:Jcowan|John Cowan]] 01:09, 2 Oct 2004 (EDT)
 [[Category:People]]

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−	See [[Anaximancer]]. The popular fame of Edvard von Craghelm is best summed up, in my opinion, in the following traditional ballad recorded in the [[Plain of Brahang]]:	+	See [[Anaximancer]]. The popular fame of '''Edvard von Craghelm''' is best summed up, in my opinion, in the following traditional ballad recorded in the [[Plain of Brahang]]:

	<blockquote>Edvard von Craghelm came to town		<blockquote>Edvard von Craghelm came to town

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	See [[Anaximancer]]. The popular fame of Edvard von Craghelm is best summed up, in my opinion, in the following traditional ballad recorded in the [[Plain of Brahang]]:		See [[Anaximancer]]. The popular fame of Edvard von Craghelm is best summed up, in my opinion, in the following traditional ballad recorded in the [[Plain of Brahang]]:

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 <br />With a rand-a-keer
 <br />And a ho-de-veer
-<br />Edvard von Craghelm makes them appear!</blockquote>
+<br />Edvard von Craghelm makes it appear!</blockquote>
 <blockquote>He took the beret right off his head
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 <br />Too good, they say, for the richest of kings.</blockquote>
-<blockquote>He pulled out a ball made all of gold
+<blockquote>He pulled out a ball all made of gold
 <br />And next came a [[Dagger Seas|Dagger Sea]] pirate so bold
 <br />That walked and talked, and brandished his sword
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 <br />A brass-bound [[Aelfants|Aelfant]], big and fat
 <br />And a [[darseed]] tree at the height of its bloom
-<br />And a full-sized [[Alezan]] grinding room.</blockquote>
+<br />And a full-sized [[Alezan]] grinding broom.</blockquote>
 <blockquote>The magic beret it seemed to be done
 <br />But that wasn't all of von Craghelm's fun
 <br />He pulled out a whole pie from inside his cloak
-<br />And we all would laugh just to see the joke.</blockquote>
+<br />And all of us laughed just to see the joke.</blockquote>
 <blockquote>CHORUS:</blockquote>

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-See [[Anaximancer]].  The fame of Edvard von Craghelm is best summed up, in my opinion, in the following traditional ballad recorded in the [[Plain of Brahang]]:
+See [[Anaximancer]].  The popular fame of Edvard von Craghelm is best summed up, in my opinion, in the following traditional ballad recorded in the [[Plain of Brahang]]:
 <blockquote>Edvard von Craghelm came to town
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 <br />With a rand-a-keer
 <br />And a ho-de-veer
-<br />Edvard von Craghelm makes things appear!</blockquote>
+<br />Edvard von Craghelm makes them appear!</blockquote>
 <blockquote>He took the beret right off his head
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 <blockquote>And next he plucked right out of his hat
 <br />A brass-bound [[Aelfants|Aelfant]], big and fat
-<br />And a darseed tree at the height of its bloom
+<br />And a [[darseed]] tree at the height of its bloom
 <br />And a full-sized [[Alezan]] grinding room.</blockquote>

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 <blockquote>Edvard von Craghelm was walking one day
-<br />From [[Egron]] to Gibbon* he made his way
+<br />From [[Egron]] to Gibbon&#x2020; he made his way
 <br />Across [[Umbo Moor]] toward Wentzel Fen
 <br />And then, and then, and then, and then ...</blockquote>
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 <br />Edvard von Craghelm ... DISAPPEARED!</blockquote>
-*Presumably Marsh Gibbon
+&#x2020;Presumably Marsh Gibbon
 '''Citations''':  [[Anaximancer]], [[Plain of Brahang]], [[Umbo Moor]].

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		+	See [[Anaximancer]].
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		+	"The most famous Anaximancer was [[Edvard von Craghelm]], who appeared one day in an unnamed small village and began to put on a great show. He proceeded to tour about the country in a random manner, never staying too long in one place, until he died under mysterious circumstances while travelling near a moor in -20 {{EC}}. Objects he produced are largely privately held, though a number are contained in various museums."