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| − | Right. Have at it then. Hack it apart. There must be plenty of inconsistancies. | + | Right. Have at it then. Hack it apart. There must be plenty of inconsistancies. I'm not quite happy with this entry, but I felt that someone had to dib it and no one else seemed eager, so I did. Mainly, to keep the game flowing. That'll teach me! I'll add the dates to the timeline after all the edits are done. --[[User:PhineasCrank|Doctor Phineas Crank]] 22:58, 22 Sep 2004 (EDT) |
| − | I'm not quite happy with this entry, but I felt that someone had to dib it and no one else seemed eager, so I did. Mainly, to keep the game flowing. That'll teach me! | ||
| − | I' | + | No worries about the timeline - when I go through my copyediting phase, I always update all the other stuff in tune with it. A ''very'' quick readthrough (pizza in the oven, no time to factcheck) makes me pause on the Gabson Foye mention: wasn't his future wife hinted at a relation with Bethany, as opposed to him? Or is it just his mother who heard wrong? My memory just may be wrong. --[[User:Morbus Iff|Morbus Iff]] 23:18, 22 Sep 2004 (EDT) |
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Revision as of 23:18, 22 September 2004
Right. Have at it then. Hack it apart. There must be plenty of inconsistancies. I'm not quite happy with this entry, but I felt that someone had to dib it and no one else seemed eager, so I did. Mainly, to keep the game flowing. That'll teach me! I'll add the dates to the timeline after all the edits are done. --Doctor Phineas Crank 22:58, 22 Sep 2004 (EDT)
No worries about the timeline - when I go through my copyediting phase, I always update all the other stuff in tune with it. A very quick readthrough (pizza in the oven, no time to factcheck) makes me pause on the Gabson Foye mention: wasn't his future wife hinted at a relation with Bethany, as opposed to him? Or is it just his mother who heard wrong? My memory just may be wrong. --Morbus Iff 23:18, 22 Sep 2004 (EDT)
